As with The Fire Within, Revisiting Sins lays the final piece that enabled me to join the freedom fight in Freelance Unincorporated.

I wanted to load the story with self-lothing and rage. Also, I like to experiment with the closer interactions with agents. In game, you just get a picture and some text. I wanted to give the impression of walking into the office, sitting at a table and looking over the prospects for employment on computer PDA pads.

If nothing else though, I wrote this story for the scene where Darius' Probe explodes in the hangar. Before anything else, I had that vision clearly baked into my mind. I only hope my words can evoke the kinds of images in your mind that I had in my mind at the time I wrote it.

What did it look like? you say... I won't tell. Afterall, if I did, then you would see it anyway. Maybe you will imagine something better than I could if not. Either way, what you see in my words is for you to create. Anything would not be yours, like me writing something I did not create.